The Shoren Tongue
The tongue of the eastern realm. Rendered untranslated in the comic. The reader is locked out on purpose.
Sound. Same kit as Shoren names. Hard onsets: Sh, S, K, T, G, R, N, M, H, D. Vowels a, e, o, i. Diphthongs ai, ae. Endings -en, -an, -on, -ai, -ath. Clipped and struck, no soft drift.
On the page. Styled distinct from common speech (italic, or its own balloon). Never translated. No angle brackets.
Grammar (built as needed, no more)
- Verb goes last. Subject, then the rest, then the verb.
- Tense and obligation ride as suffixes on the verb, not separate words.
- Intensify by doubling the word.
- An oath fronts the sentence as an outburst.
Words
- Anrai — the savage, the animal within. Shoren name for one of the Twin Gods.
- Dharen — the disciplined self. The other Twin God.
- Raen — the Dance. Holding the two in balance.
- na — I, me
- dur — to flee, to run
- shai — truly, much (doubled to intensify: shai shai)
- en — and
- sae — by, upon (to swear)
Suffixes
- -osen — should have (past obligation). dur + osen = durosen, should have run.
Lines used
- Sae Anrai en Dharen. “By the Twin Gods.” Kael’s oath when rattled.
- Sae Anrai en Dharen… na shai shai durosen. “By the Twin Gods… I really, really should have run.” (Page 5)
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